Introduction Chapter 6
Time to lead forward now to the next chapter of my fantasy novel with Laura. But before telling something about this new chapter, there is still something else to write at this point...
Personal Words
After the closing of my former main "Laura Bretan Tribute" site, here some personal words for those now, remaining with me and my novel, not to be posted on the main site any more. As I tried to tell before yet, this is me. This is what I can do and what I love to do. Laura Bretan was the one to lead me back to myself, to discover again who I really am, and what talent I still have, only sleeping inside of me for such a long time. I have written stories in a younger age yet, and now I do it again. This "Laura Bretan Fantasy Novel" really is my first try again after such a long time - and even more, my first try in English language at all. Because German is my main language, and I have only written in German before.
Well, my English is not perfect, but I try my best. And so this is my way to give something back of what I became from Laura. It means so much to me, and though, my only feeling at the end it was going lost on the main site among all other things, especially the videos. More and more them were all people were interested and reacting on.
And the confirmation was the creating of this site, where almost nobody first wanted to follow. It was so obvious then, and it only made me stronger, to make my final decision then. I am not here to load up videos which can be found anywhere else. I am here to give something personal from me, something straight from my heart, something I can show as my small talent. And this is all I still want to do...
Writing stories is an old talent from me, creating those fantasy pictures a new one. I never did this ever before, only with starting my serial novel at facebook, this idea was born. And it worked, it really worked much better than even ever hoped...
And now things have changed totally. The main site work is over, and my novel work is all to remain. I rather do it for only few people, who really like it and are interested, this is all I want.
And so, back to my novel again now...
Introduction
After a shorter fifth chapter, which simply had the main aspect to lead us from the old storyline to the new one for the next chapters, after changing the former end of the whole story to a new beginning, we now have reached the real start of this new adventure...
And so, after the preparations in chapter five, where the story in the end segue from the so far happenings into the new threat for the universe, it was a kind of reversal point for Laura and her sister Amber, as they had to learn about some very old secrets in their universe, but an universe it now seems they still do not really know...
More and more it gets obvious now, that something goes totally wrong here, as it started with the disappearance of the creator. And then the mystery about the Iverions, the ancient race of the unicorns, which had returned not so long ago, living on all planets now and eventually not being what they seem. At least their behaviour is more than strange...
And so, we have something really new now, as it never happened before, the two goddesses Laura and Amber live as angelic beings again, joining in a fellowship of chosen ones who shall search for the creator now. And solve the mysteries of the universe. It is clear already, that there is a strange new danger in this universe, but not from evil forces, but even worse. And the fellowship must find the answers now...
This is the concept for the new chapter now, as we still see the fellowship leave at the end of chapter five, entering the world Olwon then. The first traces lead them there, and we will see now what further will happen. Can this small group be successful in the end?
I hope you may find it out with me, in the further developing serial novel of the adventures of Laura, and her sister Amber. And there are new friends on their way with our beloved angels, to save this fantasy universe once more from a incredible danger...
Annotation:
Please, note. In this sixth chapter, which will be obviously longer again, there are some pictures with huge impressions of landscapes on the planet Olwon, with our heroes within them. But they sometimes may not be so easy to find because of small size then in such huge pictures, so magnify those images, that you can find our heroes then...
Prospects
Well, at this point also a small look ahead into the future of my story and the development. The original chapter VI would now have 93 (!) pictures altogether without a division. In fact, because of the length, I have now decided to make three chapters out of one. Chapter VI will tell the beginning of the adventure for our fellowship on the planet Olwon, and they will learn about what is going on there. Chapter VII will show us the end of this adventure, and it will lead to the battle for Olwon then. Chapter VIII will be something special. In a way a story between the stories, a little break for our heroes. This chapter will show the relationship between Laura and her sister Amber in a deep kind as never before, and I can promise some wonderful pictures therefore. Chapter IX will then lead us back into the adventure and onto the next chosen planet, where the traces will lead our fellowship...
Chapter IX has no name yet and also the story then has still to be created. Until then I have the story in my mind and will write it down by and by. The chapters VI to VIII have those names:
Chapter VI - Mysteries
Chapter VII - Questions & Answers
Chapter VIII - Sisters
As you can see, the story develops further. And of course I hope I can still please you with it for a long time then...
A certain further preview
Before starting with the sixth chapter of my Laura Bretan fantasy novel, let us take one further sight into the future of the story. In this case, the end of the story. Because of course the end of a novel, especially a serial novel, of course is so important, as a story stands and falls with a good or bad ending. So this is very important to me...
I have thought about the possible ending a longer time yet. To create a developing story with always new tasks and adventures is one thing. But the ending is something very special, and as this story first was unprovided for a serial novel, the grand war between heaven and hell was in my story very soon. And it is over now, all evil defeated and hell closed forever. So, what would still wait for this universe after that war???
Well, this was difficult first. I had no good idea, but finally I found my solution. It was a big idea, but on the other hand also the hardest final battle I ever created for a story so far. It was fascinating and disturbing at the same time, but I had no idea if this would work at all in the end. And so the first thing to do was to create the final enemy, as with this creature the story would work or not if I would fail...
Well, it worked. The images of this final enemy are finished yet, and this heavy battle can begin some time. It will still be a long way to get there, but the end of my story is fixed. It will be the most dangerous challenge for Laura and Amber ever, and success or failure will depend if they will understand all details in time and find the one and only weapon to destroy this final enemy. But what will the way look like to this final battle?
Until now all worlds and races had been involved into the former war of forces, all except Earth. Mankind in this fantasy story is what it also is in reality, an underdeveloped world in many meanings and not worth to join this alliance of all other races in the universe. On the contrary, those supernatural races mistrust the people of Earth for good reasons. And it is also possible in the future, that Earth will get a danger to all other races and has to be destroyed, this option was announced yet as a possibility...
So far mankind not even intuit of anything happening in this universe, except some chosen ones, who do not speak about. Chosen ones to take a great chance for their children to escape Earth and become part of a greater life on the world of the fairies, Lauhaven. But even the grad war between heaven and hell had not even been noticed on Earth...
But - all of this will change soon. Yet in chapter VI the fellowship will have to solve dark mysteries on the planet Olwon, to learn more and more about an incredible conspiracy as there had never ever been one this way before. But it will take time to reveal all details, and in the end - as much I can tell now - it all will be no less than the final apocalypse. And this time every living creature will be involved, Earth and mankind, but also hell again, as it will break loose again once more...
This time apocalypse and final boss battle will decide the whole destiny of the universe. Only one faction will survive in the end and the other side will be destroyed forever and totally. There can be no other ending, and now we are on the way to this destination. Olwon is only a first station on this long way, and the new journey will start now...
The Creation of Amber, the fantasy sister of Laura in my novel
As I started to write my novel first, it only was the story of Laura, as she should be the centre of this story. At this point there was no idea of also integrating a sister character yet. But very soon I had this feeling, that something was missing, any kind of personal relationship for our heroine. As it, of course, would not happen at all, that this young fairy would experience a love story, I wanted something different. And of course we know, Laura has a younger sister in her real-life family, and so this idea was born...
Why choosing the name "Amber"? Very easy, I simply did not know the real-life name of Laura's real sister. So I chose a fantasy name. But the real problem for me was something different - to really get a model for Amber, with multiple positions, like I had Laura pictures en masse...
Well, I could not use the real sister of Laura. There are some few pictures of her, but nothing I could work with at all. This was no option, but I also did not want to use any fantasy character here. There really should be a visible relationship to Laura, but this seemed impossible...
It seemed, but it wasn't at all. The solution here was very simple in the end - it was Laura Bretan herself in a double role. You see, those multiple videos of her are also of multiple time periods. Of different ages of Laura. And from a little girl until now she really has changed a little bit, simply ideal for me to take herself in a younger age as my Amber...
To create Amber character pictures, this works the same way as shown in my former posting with Laura character pictures. Though I do not have as much pictures as for Laura, it is more than enough to fill my story with pictures of Amber...
And so, after it worked in my novel with Laura and Amber, I thought about it how to develop both characters. And as you know amber later died in the grand war. At first I really thought to leave Laura behind like this, but in the end I changed my mind. On the contrary, I even thought Amber had too few space in my novel until then, and the relationship between her and Laura also never was what it should have been...
Amber returned, as the mysterious old man awakened her again from death and she returned from the realm of the dead. And in the end of chapter five, as you know, even the whole story changed, as it would continue and new adventures would follow. I decided to now use the human form for Laura and Amber, together with other new characters, and show more of the relationships in the future...
Chapter six will be a new beginning of my serial novel in every meaning. A whole new storyline, a fellowship working together for the first time, never known mysteries in this fantasy universe, new dangerous enemies and fantastic new pictures. For me the story now even gets better as before, but as I said it yet, I got in love with it...